Our Lady of the Salt Red Sangre
Our Woman Who's the Blue Señora
Wake our focus from its somber quiet
Solve our puzzles with your nimble fingers
Guide our vigil with your brilliant street lamps
Bless our business with your fluent say-so
Our Lady by the Gold Fenêtre
Our Duchess or the Prim Madonna
Glorify us past our daily problems
Plentify us in our meager holdings
Clarify us through our dented vision
Magnify us by our hopeful errors
Honored Goddess of the Fullest Breathing
Wisest Virgin with the Sun-Bright Candle
Navigate niches, penetrate wishes
God, godder, goddest Gal
God, or should I say, goddess, I love this! Prayerful, almost a chant and a brilliant last line. Nice, TF.
ReplyDeleteTess,
ReplyDeleteThank you! There was something about it that I thought might appeal.
You know my entries enough to know I don't reach for clear song-resonance, usually quirking my ear into some place uncommon.
This one does chant itself up and out.
TrulyF
Trulyfool,
ReplyDeleteA prayerful request for intercession....
A respectful and contemplative piece of writing.
I liked this very much.
Eileen
Eileen,
ReplyDeleteIntercession quite the right word. And I'm glad you found it respectful. The wording may seem wacky to people used to the more conventional.
Trulyfool