Night after night she loops through the nausea of word games
the drunken, petty moments in which the politics of speech
sounds like theirs, standing as a cluster of dry bushes, once
cherished tomatoes gone to seed withering in the first frost.
There's this too, the guarantee of garbled fear she slurs
making one think of the disappearance of all things
which amounts to saying goodbye to yourself, icy
and motionless, plunged in a horrible ecstasy, the other you.
To drive with her, this America, this lover,
pushes across the state-line edges around the clock,
just flight and risk, until the only sleep a neck-crick,
back-creak -- roadside sleep, refuge under a hunter's moon.
And how many miles further will this get her?
ReplyDeleteGreat use of three words. I hope you'll check out my attempt.
I like the dark flight mood of this and the troubled angst it expresses.
ReplyDeleteQuite the images this invokes well done.
ReplyDeletevery powerful imagery.
ReplyDeleteAA,
ReplyDeleteMileage depends on which gas stations will be open and who catches up when.
Thanks for coming by and liking! I will check yours out!
Trulyfool
Rallentanda,
ReplyDeleteTroubled angst is something I gravitate toward, smiling and chipping a guy though I am.
Thanks for tapping into it!
Trulyfool
Sheilagh,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comments. (By the way, I did guess right at the pronunciation of your name! Just watched The Paradine Case -- yeah, Hitchcock).
Trulyfool
Orange Tree,
ReplyDeleteThanks! Sometimes I do feel their power.
TFool
this poem should be illustrated with an Edward Hopper painting, full of harsh light and hopeless dreams
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines
Tis indeed a tale of angst and so beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Isabel,
ReplyDeleteI can resonate with Hopper. My 'America kick' has been percolating for a while. Not sure what exactly is eating me, but it's there, lonely among the open opportunities.
TFool
HyperC,
ReplyDeleteComing back to it after two weeks, I feel it strongly still.
Thank you for 'beautifully done'.
Trulyfool