Someone tells her to seek the key of A
around and around the evening stays lit
it's a wonder there are tunes, most of space is silent
she seesaws her bow, her chin dips
the theater-goers catch her last chords
think of supper, marriage, of being alone
You have set the mood well and gotten inside the musician's mind with your words here! Nice.
ReplyDeleteThis gave me chills, TF...
ReplyDelete...she seesaws her bow, her chin dips.... so few words, showing so much depth. Excellent read.
ReplyDeletethat marriage is placed right next to being alone...nice touch...and so telling...and captures as well the feel of the picture rompt...
ReplyDeleteMary,
ReplyDeleteIt was mood, primarily, as I wrote. Thanks!
TF
Tess,
ReplyDelete(I'll get you shawl from the other room)
Truly
Karen,
ReplyDeleteThank you! I realized this was short, but I felt happy to get in what I did.
Trulyfool
Brian,
ReplyDeleteParts of this were with me for a while, but it didn't gel until what you point out -- the marriage/alone juxtaposition.
TF
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